Beta's Bio

Out of Character Information

Gender:
Your Gender: Female
Date Joined: 10/20/13

RP Characters: Beta
Who Referred You: Google


Character Information

Name: Beta
Age: Young Adult (1.5)
Gender: Female
Species: The Eastern Timber Wolf
Pack: (Would like to be in Kachle, but will be happy to join any pack that Beta is welcome)
Rank: Warrior (She takes what she receives she don't beg and understands that the world of alpha is law so don't pick fights with them)




Appearance:
Beta is solid black with very bright and light husky blue eyes. She has very long soft beautiful fur. Beta is large and strong. She has very sharp, long black claws and long white fangs. She has a scar that is on her high muzzle that leads to her left eye and it has and never will get her down. She is tall and has a long muscular frame. Her ears are normal size. She is so dark that she can't be seen in the night very easy. You will only see her when she wants you to.

Personality:
Beta is large and strong, and knows how to use them to her advantages. She is LOYAL, wise and sneaky, she is aggressive when needed. She is dominant but she knows her place in the world and sticks with it. She knows better then to pick fights with alphas or others in higher ranks then her. But she will defend herself and her right to be herself. She is sweet and kind and loving, so if she is sweet to you then she has taking a liking to you. Beta is very smart and knows how to confuse others with a blink of an eye. She is slick and quiet, when out at night and dissappers don't bother looking she blends in very well and is silent as a field mouse. Beta is high spirited and is nicknamed as "Deoblo's child." Because she comes from the un-known area of the darkened depths of the east end. She looks very mean and devilish because of her large frame and color. She has the moments were she will get overwhelmed and will snap and his very powerful as she is the largest type of wolf where she comes from. She was delta in her last pack and is fit for a high rank like Beta.   

History:  (Beta was given her name was Betana, but no one liked it so she goes by Beta now only those who truly like her and maybe love her call her Betana)

Beta had a very different history, meaning strange. She was the second biggest in her family first was her brother then her then her other brother then her sister. Her mother died shortly after she was born due to a wound across her neck from a fight with a lone wolf that had enters the lands of my pack and she trusted her and the lone wolf attacked her so my father killed her and beta's mother soon died, and Beta was devastated. Her brother soon after that ran of to find a pack of his own as he no longer wanted to be just a hunter for the rest of his life, and after all his life just had began. Then followed her youngest brother and started his own pack as he found out what if feels like to be an Alpha and to be in-charge and he wanted the power so he left and started his own pack . Her sister attacked her because she knew that Beta would be the next beta or alpha, and  her sister was the runt and lost the fight that she had stated, Beta told her to never do it again and tried to tell her she didn't want the rank if it meant that much to her but, her sister just didn't give up. She attacked again soon after the first and Beta had no choice but to survive and put her sister down. She went to go tell her father the truth but the pack had already told him the lies and he chased her out of the pack. She was disappointed in her father but left with her head held high. She went to her elder brother to tell him the truth and he believe her and asked her to join, and she turned him down telling him she needed to do this on her own if she ever wanted to be a better wolf then she could ever be, she had to try and to do her best on her own, which means no easy ways out of it. So she left at midnight and is now in search of a forever home which accepts her for her and is willing to take on her and her high spirited life. And that will stick by her side through the think and thin and in favor will do the same NO MATTER WHAT the issue is she will side with you if you side with her when needed.

I meant she is very powerful* Not his very powerful...please excuse that mistake

In regards to the rank request, Beta and Alpha positions are earned eventually in the role-play. They are not given out at the border. Your character would likely start out as a hunter or a warrior.

Also, we try to refrain from "wolf-speak" here. Though, the only place I noticed it was when you used the term "left optic" in your description of her appearance.

Speaking of the appearance, it would be nice to get a photo just for reference as well. I know sometimes the site won't let you post it for a week or so, but eventually we'd like to see one ^.^

Her personality looks good, other than the part about her originating in the Haunted Forest, as that is an area within the pack territory and she would have had to originate outside of the packs' borders.

Her history also looks good, and adheres to the length requirements, though I am a bit interested to hear more details about the reasoning behind her sister attacking her as well as the happenings around her mother's death and her brothers leaving. I've always found the best characters that I've created have in-depth descriptive histories that I then use to build up their personality and the reasons behind their behavior from.

Alright I shall add some more and fix up the bio right now and ill resend it and let you know when it is done. Thanks for the advice. ~Beta

Please change her desired rank, as she would not be allowed to join the pack as an alpha or beta.

Also, this is a list of the only acceptable wolf species on Incendio
>> https://incendio.rpg-board.net/t228-acceptable-wolf-species-for-incendio <<

Accepted. You may now post at a pack's border lands to have your character accepted in-character.

Welcome to Incendio!